Memory Palace

Your works are always amazing, and little to change to make it even better. Fanastice work always. Another list again why it's so great :}
-Textures- amazinggg, I can tell will is wearing a sweater by the textures, that his pants is a stiff fabric from the folds, the door is polished but not new, the metal on the door knobs also are shined to be know its metal but not new, Hannibal's suit has a matte texture and it's not super shiny, The skin isn't super smooth, and has a soft texture to show skin isn't really smooth (a lot of artist do that). The background turning into smoke is well done too!
-Contrast- Obvious contrast in the work, but not dramatic. Personally I like contrast dramatic so it makes more emphasis on the subject and tells the story even more with getting the focus to their faces, but it loses some parts. Mild contrast, but its good.
-Color- (contrast)- Red on will, and blue on Hannibal! the opposite colors show opposing values, and brightens whats between them (and them), good choice :}
to make things more dramatic, you can go a bit surreal and make them a little paler in skin tones, and the background brighting to show tensions. Or just make Will paler to show a dieing feeling?, maybe hannibal too, but he's the one locking the door, how ever you want to say/show it!!! but i think you get what i mean.
(Selection)- Nothing is super bright and unrealistic colors (like neons :s), good. Could make the spacy sutff on top a little brighter? or with more vibrant colors, because i didn't notice it until i looked at everything. In the background, should be able to see stuff but vaguely. not so its nonexistent, but to keep the focus on will and hannibal you could just put a few bright points not super bright, like nebulas in it.
-Shading- Amazinggg as always. Could put a darker shading on the lower half of Will ,like Hannibal for contrast(overallcontrast). Reflective light A++ :} I can obviously tell where the light sources are coming from.
-Composition- Yep, good. My eye is brought to their faces and the hands on the doors.
-Other- Make the smoke a little more noticeable? Tells a lot about the story, and it would be nice if more it could bee seen.

I hope this was an ok Critique!!