What I love about this is how simple the idea is yet how much of an impact it makes. The drawing is absolutely incredible. You manage to sum up alot of what happens in a fairly complex story line in only five pictues that, in themseles are really beautiful and exceedingly well drawn. However, the only thing that I would say is that I think you might have put in a little too much light variation in the third picture, as a singular drawing it does look very effective but because there is quite a lot of light variation in the other pictures naturally, it may be a little too much.
Overall, I think that this is really amazing, well done.